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I wrote my first poem today. (lemmy.world)

submitted 8 months ago by BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world to c/casualconversation@lemm.ee

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It's obviously pretty novice, and the subject matter is r o u g h, but I don't think it's bad. Needs more art to it, but I think it'll evolve.

Just sprang out of my head while I was in the shower and I scribbled it down while it was fresh. Never happened to me before.

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[–] shinigamiookamiryuu@lemm.ee 2 points 8 months ago (1 children)

What kind of poem was it? You can share it here if you'd like.

[–] BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world 11 points 8 months ago (1 children)

Ok. Hope it's not too trite.

[–] shinigamiookamiryuu@lemm.ee 5 points 8 months ago (1 children)

Oh it's the free verse kind. I don't think it's bad. A good poem (of any kind; I specialize in sestinas for example) is one you can feel, and I could relate to the vibes.

[–] BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world 3 points 8 months ago (1 children)

Thanks!

[–] shinigamiookamiryuu@lemm.ee 1 points 8 months ago (1 children)

Is this your first one?

[–] BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world 2 points 8 months ago

Yes it is!